Genevieve :P

Can we start now? :smt032 Oh and I think I forgot to add that my girl-Hayley-is up for love :smt049

This was awesome, it needs a little more expanding, and could be a nice short story, that is if you wanted to make it a few hundred words longer. :D ...

ooooohh!!! I soo want to join! This is going to be sooooo much fun :D Name: Hayley Hawkins (nickname=Hayles) Age: 14 Grade: 9 Race: Ghost Appearance: Hayley is very tall ...

I loved it. Will give proper review later, am a bit busy at the moment, keep writing :D

Okay, so I realize that the next part was just the next day, but I also had a hard time figuring that out, if you hadn't have told me in ...

Hey I'm Gen. I love romantic fiction, so this should be fun. I'm all for nit-picky reviews, so I'm going to treat you to one of mine; here we go. ...

Name:Storme (No Last Name) Age:16 Weight/Height:115 lbs, 5'8" SecTor:Beserka Appearance: She looks exactly like this, only she has deep blue eyes that have a very small faint ring of hazel ...

Hey Mo. I shall have fun dissecting your story. :P The sky is the colour worn jeans Apart from the fact that color is spelled wrong (but only because this ...

Hey, I'm Gen, and it will be my pleasure reviewing your story today. OK, so this is a good story. I like it, but I think describing the 'transformers' as ...

Hey I'm Gen, and it will be my pleasure to review your work. :smt003 Only a few things But unfortunately, I am more beat up than you are, according to ...

Hey, I'm Gen, and I will be very happily reviewing your work for the next few minutes. Now for some nit-picking... Tanya opened her eyes to black. I don't really ...

I really liked your story, though there are definitely some places where it you wording could be rearranged. I would nit-pick through it, but I don't really see the point, ...

Hey, loved the story. There was one thing that was bugging me, but other than that awesome. :smt003 The winds were enormous and everyone had to board up their windows. ...

I really like this story, good job. :smt003 xD I only really have one thing to say about this; the beginning of your story made no sense. She asks him ...

Hey I'm Gen, and I am going to have fun reviewing your really awesome work :smt003 I thought that was really awesome! Me, I'm a little more into poetry with ...